Charlotte Bowen 5032

Thursday, 8 March 2012

Main task- First edit feedback

Good points

-Well framed shots

-Good lighting

-Interesting storyline

Points for improvement

-Possibly to many jump cuts at the beginning

-Need music/sound
Posted by Sawtry at 14:15
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